“Where do I start?” 

I bet you expect me to say, “at the beginning”–nope.  It’s perfectly acceptable to begin writing a scene from the middle of your story if you’re really excited to write it, or if you know how to end it but not to begin it.  But what might be helpful would be creating an outline for an overall idea of how you want the story to go.

“But I don’t know how to outline!”

There are so many templates for outlines, from the super-broad to the intricately detailed.  No matter what works for you, you can probably find an outline template for you online.  My personal choice is the seven-point outline, which you can learn all about on Youtube.  The point is, people write in different ways–some prefer a detailed outline before writing, some like a loose, general outline (like me), others don’t.  You don’t know which camp you’re in until you try.

Another way to dip your toe into writing is world-building.  If you write sci-fi or fantasy, you’ll especially have to do this.  World-building is where you make up details of the setting that may or may not be mentioned in your story, but will make the story feel more fleshed out.  This can range from making up religions and magic systems, to economics and government.  You can also try to figure out your characters’ backstory, interests, and other details that may or may not be important to the plot, but will help inform your characters’ actions.

Remember, there are multiple ways to start writing.  The only way to lose is to never try–then all the people who tell you that you’ll never be a writer (and that your ideas are dumb) will win.  And that leads us to the second question.

“Is my idea for a story even worth writing about?”

This is a question you will likely have no matter how much you’ve written.  Apparently Neil Gaiman (who’s written Sandman, Coraline, The Graveyard Book, and many others) calls his editor with this fear every time he writes a new book.  I’ve had this crisis of thought multiple times–the answer is “Yes.”  Not always for the same reasons, though.

Not everything you write will be published.  I remember my first writing endeavor–in seventh grade, I began writing a story about a girl who finds out she’s a witch, and goes to a girl’s boarding school for witches.  This was eventually scrapped because 1) I had matured to the point where I didn’t feel like ripping off Harry Potter anymore, and 2) I had a much better idea that I wanted to write instead.

Ripping off Harry Potter wasn’t a waste of my time, even though it was never published anywhere.  If I had never started to write an entry-level story, I never would have gotten that initial practice I sorely needed.  It also had another effect: I knew I could write.  I began to look at myself as a writer, and started me on a path to learn as much as I could about writing.  After numerous podcasts, how-to books, and mediocre first drafts, I’m proud of how much progress I’ve made since I first began to write.

As one of my favorite authors told me, writing is like an apprenticeship.  It takes time, practice, and the willingness to be a beginner.  Sometimes you find out that writing’s not for you, and that’s not a loss.  And sometimes you do really well and end up publishing.  The only way to truly lose, is to give up before you even start.

Now that you have some ideas on how to start, are there any other questions burning in your mind on how to proceed?  Feel free to email me at madwar_krui@yahoo.com with any questions or concerns about writing.  Perhaps it’ll inspire my next column!  Happy holidays, and happy writing!

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Iowa City. The famed Athens of the Midwest. I’ve heard many people say that the University of Iowa was built on the arts, and the Writing Workshop here is world-renowned. So is it any wonder that I, an aspiring author, ended up going to graduate school here? Well, kind of, since I’m in the biology department, but a girl can have multiple interests.  And one of those interests is not only writing, but sharing my personal tips and tricks with other fellow writers.  I’m by no means an English or Creative Writing expert, but I’ve been going at it ten or so years, and I’ve found plenty of resources that have helped me to progress to the level I’m at now.

For the purposes of this column, “Mary Sue Says,” I’d like to go by Mary Sue, like Abby of “Dear Abby.” Why Mary Sue, you ask me? Because the term “Mary Sue” is one of those concepts I believe every beginning fiction writer should know when they begin to develop their main character.

At first, “Mary Sues” were only applied to original characters in fan fiction, where it was obvious the character was meant to stand in for the actual author – simply a form of wish-fulfillment rather than a character any of the readers could really relate to. As of today, a Mary Sue can be a fictional character in any medium, not just in fan fiction.  However, an overt Mary Sue (or Gary Stu, for male characters) is often easily identified by several symptoms.

1. How awesome they are.
2. Other characters’ relationships to them.
3. How smoothly their story goes (usually because of how awesome they are).

First, most Mary Sues are written to be the main character of the story. This means we have a lot of insight to their viewpoint, and their problems. In a fantasy story, there are a lot of awesome characters with really cool powers. But when a character starts becoming powerful beyond belief, either by breaking the laws of that fictional universe or by not having any truly challenging obstacles or personal flaws in their life, that’s when a character might be a Mary Sue.

For example, Harry Potter.  The Boy Who Lived is obviously a special person in his setting, but he has a number of enemies who try to get him killed – or worse, expelled! – and Harry often fails or screws up throughout the book series.  He’s by no means all-powerful, and we’re always reminded that he’s just a normal teenager who can use magic.  In the series, he’s not the smartest of his friend group. We often see him struggle in classes, or procrastinate on asking somebody to the school dance. That’s good character writing.

However, a character who is a master on the very first day they learn a skill, who nearly everyone likes except the one token villain, and who was practically perfect in everyway? That is a good character to avoid like the plague.  Nobody can be that perfect and be relatable, unless we find out later that they have more nefarious purposes in mind.

Second, how do the supporting characters find your main character? Is your main character seen as super-attractive? A genius of their time? The nicest and sweetest person anybody’s met?  In that case, you might have a Mary Sue on your hands. Like a said earlier, the best characters have awesome qualities and some major personal flaws (and I’m not talking about “her teeth are too straight”). And supporting characters need to be aware of those flaws, whether from the start or from learning about them in the middle of the story.  Supporting characters shouldn’t be yes-men or worshippers of your main character… unless your character is their boss or cult leader, I guess.  A good tip to remember is that everyone considers themselves the main character of the story – all of your characters can be interesting, or at least notable, without relying on any of the other characters to tell the reader how awesome they are.

Third, how many bumps in the road does your character have before accomplishing their goal?  How high are the stakes, and does your main character make any mistakes?  If the only reason any danger occurs is due to some other character constantly messing up, and your main character is perfectly blameless or flawless, that’s a sign of a possible Mary Sue.

Another common Mary Sue tactic?  Sacrificing their life for the sake of the other characters (because they’re just so gosh-darned perfect), and then being resurrected because… the writer made it happen.  It trivializes the climax, and often doesn’t make the intended impact because the Mary Sue is so perfect and awesome and cool.  The problem is, when you have somebody who is impossibly cool as a main character, it’s hard for a reader to relate.  It’s why Frodo is the main character in Lord of Rings, not Gandalf.  Every main character needs to be relatable in some way to your readers – otherwise, nobody will want to finish reading it.

Mary Sues (or Gary Stus – again, this kind of character can be any gender, race, sexual orientation, etc.) are a common feature of beginning writers.  Nobody wants a dull, unlikeable main character, right?  But developing a character in any kind of fiction is a balancing act.  What makes it even harder is that there are so many reasons a trait works on one character, but makes another character turn into a Mary Sue.  It something that requires a lot of thought, as well as the ability to think not just as a writer, but as a reader.

I can’t list everything in one article, but if you want to know more, this link can help with some common traits of Mary Sue characters.  Check out the Mary Sue Litmus Test to see how close to the Mary Sue zone your own main character might be.  And of course, if you’d like to ask your own questions about writing characters, plot, etc., I’m always available at madwar_krui@yahoo.com.  Maybe it’ll even give me an idea for my next column!  Let me know what you think, and happy writing!

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